1) Kyle M - The Boy
     I believe this story had a well thought out plot. It was very easy to read and it never confused the reader. The story had a great flow to it and it always kept you wanting to read more. Also all the inventory was used.
2)Haley E - The Drummer
    This was an amazing story! I thought this had a very interesting plot. The author has a great imagination. The story flows very well. All the inventory was used.
3)Xin J- The story of the box
     The story contained all the 13 items. It was clear and easy to read. It was very interesting how the story traveled all round. I thought the story had a great moral to it. 
 
 
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